in the streets i always stumble,
that is unless, im walking straight.
and in the night i fall in love,
that is unless, i fall in hate.
and and in the garden im staring at beauty,
that is unless, im starring at guilt.
and if you are an apparation
of my past... then walk right in.
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and if you are an apparation
ReplyDeleteof my past... then walk right in.
Favorite line, good structure
and great job!
I walk in. It's hot.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this.
ReplyDeleteThe way you structured it, on top of the good writing, made this quite enjoyable.
I love it :]
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